That's an interesting poem. Love is sweet like summer rain, is that how you feel about the snow? Like you love it? Definately made me think! Could you try taking the numbers away so it looks more like a poem instead of a list? Is that doable? Well done for sticking to the haiku formula.
Hi Max
ReplyDeleteThat's an interesting poem. Love is sweet like summer rain, is that how you feel about the snow? Like you love it? Definately made me think! Could you try taking the numbers away so it looks more like a poem instead of a list? Is that doable? Well done for sticking to the haiku formula.